Tuesday, November 30, 2010

Final Exam


            Both The Lesson by Toni Cade Bambara and The Growing College Gap by Tamara Draut discuss our nations growing financial issues between social classes. The Lesson juxtaposes black life to white society while Draut’s compares college attendance and financial aid statistics with those from 40 years ago. Both the story and essay comment on lifestyle differences as it relates to wealth.
            The Lesson by Toni Cade Bambara is a story about social values and norms of black society compares with those to whites. The story follows a group of African-American children who live in the slums of New York. Another woman named Miss Moore, who is an upper class black woman, gives these kids five dollars and puts them in a cab to show them around New York City. She takes them to FAO Schwartz where the kids are shocked with the ridiculous prices for simple toys. The point of this was for Miss Moore to show the children how upper class white society lived in comparison with them. Most of the kids couldn’t even understand how some toy would cost a family $35 when “thirty-five dollars would pay for the rent and the piano bill too” (Bambara 5). Miss Moore’s goal was to educate these children about the divide between the two classes and to understand how the wealth in our country isn’t divided up properly. She explains to them that “poor people have to wake up and demand their share of the pie” (Bambara 5). Miss Moore’s intentions were to contrast their lifestyles with the lifestyles of wealthy whites in order for them to better understand the divide between social classes.
            Tamara Drauts’s essay entitled The Growing College Gap similarly discusses social class in America but how it relates to the college education system. Draut compares income differences and tuition costs from the seventies to now to better explain the gap between well-off education individuals and the undereducated minority population. Draut first discusses the baseline in the seventies when “a professional with a college degree and a blue collar worker with a high school degree could live in the same community” (Draut 379).  She then goes on to explain that skyrocketing tuition and a major decline in financial aid creates a huge divide between those who attended college and those who didn’t, as it relates to their enormous earning difference. African American’s are more likely to enroll in a two-year college whereas “wealthier students are battling it out for seats at a handful of elite private institutions” (Draut 380). She explains that even though graduate enrollment increased among students of color, they still do not continue on for advanced degrees because of high levels of undergraduate debt. She asserts that as this problem worsens, “we’ll have a well-educated minority that is mostly white, and a swelling, undereducated majority that is mostly African American and Latino” (Draut 390).
            Although leaps and bounds have been made against discrimination for African-American’s in our country, both Draut’s essay and Bambara’s story seem to suggest otherwise. Both the texts comment on the African-American struggle relative to financial and social class differences. They draw similar parallels between the social class struggle and the hardships minorities still face today. 

Tuesday, November 9, 2010

Works Cited

1. Book:

-Sigmund, Freud. The basic writings of Sigmund Freud. New York: The Modern Library, 1938.

-Arlow, Jacob A. The legacy of Sigmund Freud. International Universities Press, 1956.

Journal:

-Reppen, Joseph. "The Relevance of Sigmund Freid for the 21st century." Psychoanalytic Psychology Vol 23(2). 2006. Ebsco Host. Web. 9 November 2010.

-Freud, Sigmund. "The Psychopathology of Everday Life." Foundations of Psychological thought: A history of Psychology. pp 237-243. Ebsco Host. Web. 9 November 2010.

2. Book:

-Winter, Douglas E. Stephen King, the Art of Darkness. New York: New American Library, 1984.

-Iaccino, James F. Jungian reflections within the cinema : a psychological analysis of sci-fi and fantasy archetypes. Westport, Connecticut: Praeger, 1998.

Journal:

-Oakes, David Ashby. "Twentieth-Century American Gothic Literature as Cultural Artifact: Science and Technology as Sources of Destabilization in the Fiction of H. P. Lovecraft, Richard Matheson, and Stephen King." Dissertation Abstracts International. Vol. 59 Issue 5, pp 1573-1573. 1998. Ebsco Host. Web. 9 November 2010.

-Hoppenstand, Gary. 'Series(ous) SF Concerns." Journal of Popular Culture. Vol. 38 Issue 4, pp 603-604. 2005. Ebsco Host. Web. 9 November 2010.

3. Book:

-Hopkins, Lisa. Screening the Gothic. Austin, TX: University of Texas Press, 2005.

-Duggett, Tom. Gothic romanticism: architecture, politics, and literary form. New York: Palgrave Macmillan, 2010.

Journal:

-Riley, Michael. “Gothic Melodrama and Spiritual romance: visions and Fidelity

Thursday, November 4, 2010

Pick a Scene

A scene that stuckout for me in Shawshank Redemption is the final scene where Red goes in to ask for parol and finally gets approved. Throughout the entire movie, he goes before the council multiple times to ask to be let out from his life sentence early and be put on parol. They ask him a series of questions, one of which being "do you think you're rehabilitated." In previous sessions, he always answered the same way: yes. In this scene though, Red goes before them and when they ask him the same question, he gives a different response. He confronts the man by asking what that word even truly means. He says that he thinks its a made up word for people like him to have a job. He goes on to say that what he think the guy should be asking is if he is sorry for what he did. And Red obviously explains that "theres not a day that goes by that I don't feel sorry for what I did." Through his speech he expresses how hes changed and what he's learned from the situation and by simply not answered "yes" to his question, Red was approved for Parol. Theres nothing that I don't understand, but I do wonder what it was that changed Reds response. After every time him giving the same exact answer, what was it that made him say something different? I think it was Andy, and him escaping, and just in general the way that he influenced him throughout their stay in prison. The way that this contributes to my essay would be exactly what Red was saying. This man sits there and from one or two questions, hes suppose to be able to rightfully judge if prisoners are ready to reenter the world? From one answer their suppose to be able to see if they've learned their lesson. But thats not the way it should be. Prisons should have people watching behavior and seeing if these guys's actions show that they've learned their lesson. Obviously actions speak louder then words and asking one or two mundane questions isn't going to reveal anything about anyone. Red just happened to stand up for himself and speak out against the guy and somehow that got him parol? That just doesn't make sense. If he never had the courage to lash back against him he probably would have never been granted parol. This definetly contributes to the corruption as the state just pays some guy to sit there and ask them one question and base their freedom off of it, which is so wrong. Also it contribues to the message about feeling free even in a prison because he obviously came to realize what he did and came to terms with it. And he came to terms with the fact that theres nothing he can do about it and as much as he wishes he could go back and tell his teenage self what a stupid idea it is, he knows that its too late. He knows that the old man who he is now is all thats left.

gray area
who makes the rules
commenting on the institution
apathy-dont care about them
failure of the system to do its duty

Tuesday, November 2, 2010

Paper 3 Outline


Introduction:
-Backround information about the movie
-Backround information on what prisons are/ what they are suppose to do (goals)
Thesis: The corruption within the American correctional institution is portrayed in the film Shawshank Redemption by revealing the true conditions of life in prison. Prisoners’ inability to adjust back to everyday life, illegal activites and wrongful incarceration are just some themes that expose this corruption while suggesting the possibility of finding freedom within confinement and captivity within freedom.
Body #1
Topic Sentence:  This corruption is clearly expressed through these criminals incapability in adjusting to life outside prison as instead of ‘correcting’ the criminals, they make it impossible for them carry out a normal life outside the bounds of confinement.
-talk about Bogs, the man who hung himself after he was released from Prison
-Red’s nervousness to leave prison
-the use of solitary confinement, furthering the bounds of which they have to move--when there always in such a small space how could they ever adjust back to the world?
àthey felt free within prison because they taught them to feel this way and when they left they felt like they were in prison because they didn’t teach them how to reenter society

Body #2
Topic Sentence: The illegal activities exposed of prison life from not only the prisoners but of officers in power clearly suggest an element of corruption.
-Wardon Norton using prisoners as laborers so he doesn’t have to spend more
-Wardon using Andy to launder money all under a fake person
            -talk about the end and what happens to him
-Red somehow getting anything anybody wanted and sneaking it in

Body #2
Topic Sentence:
In this film, personal gain becomes more important than the truth about freeing an innocent man and suggests that false imprisonment within institutions is a common and normal scenario.
-define false imprisonment
-Andy was innocent but the Wardon killed the only person who could prove it so that he would continue helping him with laundering money
-Wardon only cared about what was best for him and not for others, selfish


Paper 3 Thesis Statement

The corruption within the American correctional institution is portrayed in the film Shawshank Redemption by revealing the true conditions of life in prison. Prisoners’ inability to adjust back to everyday life, illegal activites and wrongful incarceration are just some themes that expose this corruption while suggesting the possibility of finding freedom within confinement and captivity within freedom.

Paper 3 Prewrite

For my third paper I want to write about the movie Shawshank Redemption. I love this movie. I think it may be one of the greatest movies every made and there is so much that I could write about. What i really want to focus on is the corruption within the system. I really want to research information about prisons and correctional institutions and learn more about what there like, what they aim to do/their goals and the statistics for people who come out of them. In shawshank, the prison institution is portrayed in such a negative light. They call these places "correctional" institutions but they don't correct like they should. When these prisoners get let out of jail and kill themselves because they can't adjust to normal life-it didn't correct them at all. So I want to look at the corruption within prisons using this movie as evidence. What I just explained about prisoners killing themselves happened to one of the characters in the movie. He was let out after like 50 years in jail and he had his own apartment and got a job working at the grocery store but after a while he was so scared and didn't understand what life was like outside of prison. They kept him so sheltered for so long that he couldn't readjust back to reality and hung himself in his apartment. Then the other example in the movie would be about the Wardon. The wardon uses prisoners as laborers to do work around the jail so that he doesn't have to pay workers. Then he uses Andys accounting skills to his advantage and makes him launder money under a fake person. I also want to look at wrongful incarceration and how insane it is that some people spend their whole lives in jail for a crime they didn't commit. In the movie, Andy is seemingly innocent and when they find the guy who actually did commit the crime, the wardon has the man who was relaying the information killed so that andy would have to stay in jail and continue with scheming money. Theres so much within the movie that can provide evidence towards how these institutions are corrupt and the system needs to be reevaluated so that these prisoners can go to jail and recover from their crimes and not come out worse then they went in.


Discussion: My friend told me that I might need to broaden the topics a little bit so that I would have enough to talk about in 6 pages. She suggested that I go more into research about prisons and jails so that I can compare and contrast what prison is really like with the way that its portrayed in the movie and see if its accurate. She also suggested I re-watch the movie which I definitely want to do so that I can find more concrete examples to back up my thesis.

Legalize?

On the CNN website there is a video clip from the news today about election day and California's vote for Prop 19. Yes on Prop 19 would legalize the use of marijuana in the state of California. Prop 19 aims to "control and tax cannabis." The video clip is from a pep rally held today on the state vote of wether or not marijuana should be legalized. The woman's argument for why Californians should vote yes on 19 is because of the obvious boost our economy would get from this. She talks about the amount of that is going to criminal drug cartels and how all that money should be going to the state. They talk about drug and gang-related murders that have happened because of the drug cartel and how the legalization of cannabis would make our streets safer. We would stop arresting people for possession of marijuana and let the police focus on more violent crimes and criminals. As a Californian myself, I'm not sure where I stand on this topic. I think that many of the points that they made are quite valid, but the actual legalization of something that has been illegal for so long would just be weird. I couldn't imagine being on the streets of LA and smelling someone smoke weed as casually as they would a cigarette.

Thursday, October 28, 2010

Dumb and Dumber

The dumb and dumber trailer has lots of elements that make it funny and a comedy. Some of them are the bright colors and bright-lite scenes, upbeat music and constant sound/laughter. The way that they change it to be a horror trailer is first they made it black and white. The absence of color is just dark and cold and make its more suspensful and horror-like. Then, they had to slow down what they were saying and pause on certain words and phrases so it sounded as if they were being creepy and murder-like. They also would pause the sound and put loud thumping noises that are meant to create fear and suspense. I think they were sucessful in making it a horror trailer. Ways they could have changed the genre even more would be to change different elements. To create a romance they would have to add in romantic music or love songs and just give scenes where Jim Carreys expressing his love for the girl. They would also want to keep it in color and keep the slow scenes to make it seem like they are in love. If they were doing an action trailer they would want to keep the scenes as fast pace as they could and maybe even speed them up from the original. They would add in action music and upbeat intense sounds so that its quick and the scenes are constantly changing.

Halloween

In this scene there is a boy and a girl sitting on the couch making out. They are aboutto go upstairs and we see them through the window outside, seemingly through someone else's eyes. The teenagers go upstairs and we then enter the house. We can't see the person who's eyes we are looking through but we see them go into the kitchen and pick up and large, sharp knife. The boy then comes down the stairs and leaves and the camera starts walking upstairs. Through their eyes, we walk into the girl's room where she is sitting there naked and we see her die. Whats interesting about it is the point of view is as if we are in the scene. It creates for even more thrill and suspence because the viewer feels like they are in the house and could potentionally be harmed as well. The camera then goes back downstairs where it gets turned around and we see the killer is actually the girls younger brother. I think this type of movie is exactly what King is referring to when he argues that everyone is a little bit insane. People who saw this movie went to the theatres to see a girl being murdered by her own 5 year old brother. That is such a sad and grotesque image that most people wouldn't categorize as 'fun' to watch. Even the character himself defends King's point because this little boy is obviously not fully there mentally.

Why We Crave Horror Films

In his article, Stephen King is trying to persuade readers the reasons that we go to see horror films. He gives different reasons, one of which is because seeing a horror film reassures us of how normal we actually are. He goes on to say that we all have this innate cruelty within us and when we go to see a film like this we can watch that malice behavior. He says that if we share brotherhood, "we all share insanity of man." We go to the movies to watch acts that would otherwise be criticized in the real world. He talks about how at a young age we learn the different from right and wrong and how we are both positively and negatively reinforced and/or punished for bad behaviors. These horror films give into the small part of your brain that wants to do bad, cruel things. These movies are satsifying our evil side without any outward ramifications afterward. I think he has a valid argument. It makes sense that there is a part of us that craves evil or else we wouldn't enjoy watching people being cut up and murdered in scary films like these. We see these movies in the dark, not only because it intensifies the suspense factor, but because we are somewhat ashamed of finding thrill and fun out of watching other people (although obviously not real) struggle to survive.

Wednesday, October 27, 2010

What else are they keeping?


An article posted on CNN's website entitled, "Parents shocked to learn examiner kept son's brain" was one that really shocked me. The article is about a kid named Jesse Shipley who was a 17 year old boy that died in a car accident. His parents had mourned his death and Jesse was buried, when 2 months later something horrible happened. The high school that Jesse had attended went on a school field trip to the morgue where they found a jar with a brain on it labeled 'Jesse Shipley'. Obviously, these kids were shocked and utterly confounded and when Adre and Korisha Shipley heard the news they were simply horrified. From this incident, there is an ongoing debate on whether the medical examiners should be forced to tell the family if they are keeping any remains of a body after an autopsy. The controversy lies in if you tell the family, the person you tell might be connected with the reason the person died in the first place. It also further upsets a family during such a hard time. Personally, I think that the family needs to know no matter what. Burying your child, loved one or family member is hard enough and when you do so you want to believe that they have all their organs inside them and in tact. Also, figuring out months later that the morgue lied to you just makes the healing process that much harder. The family is suing the city and I hope they get a settlement out of this because I could never image how horrifying this would be. 

Tuesday, October 26, 2010

Pan's Labyrinth

Wow. Whats going on in this movie is theres a girl who is being told certain directions. She is told to use the chalk to create a door and once she goes through the door she has the amount of time until the last grain of salt drops from the hourglass to get back. She then enters this fantasy world where there are little fairies telling her what to do and an evil Voldemort-like character who is seemingly dead. The mood of this scene is very suspensful. The music is dark and intense so that we are on the edge of our seat. We don't know whats going to happen and we are awaiting the climax of the scene. The fantasy world that she goes into is dark and creepy. It is like a dungeon of some sort that is eery and cave-like. She walks over to the table and its full of fruit that she wants to eat but the fairies tell her not too. She eats it anyway and it summons the creepy demon guy who gets up and sticks his eyeballs into his hands. That wasthe creepiest part to me. There were holes in his head for his eyes but he put them into his hands and places his hand to his face so he could see. Why did he do this? Why couldn't he just have put them into his head and then been able to use his hands as hands? Also, who was the voice telling this little girl what to do?The lighting is very dark and gives off a scary mood because we can't see everything in the picture and we don't know if somethings going to pop out at us and scare us. I think the genre would be considered some kind of suspense/fantasy movie because these creatures are obviously not real. The climax of the scene is after she accidentily summons this evil creature it runs after her and chaces her to the exit. She runs as fast as she can and the hourglass stops and the door closes. She then pulls out her chalk and creates another exit for herself in the ceiling and escapes the monster. But if the hourglass stopped shouldn't she be stuck there? How could she make another exit for herself? Doesn't that defeat the purpose of the hourglass alltogether?

Pleasantville

The plot of the scene we saw of this movie was of a husband and a wife having an intense discussion. The man is telling his wife what to do. He is telling her she must go to a meeting and that every night she must be home at 6 with dinner ready for him on the table. The conflict arrises when she doesn't agree to these terms. She defies him and tells him that he can heat up his own dinner, and that she is leaving. The lighting is intresting in this film because the husband is in black and white but the wife is in color. This comments on the emotional state of these characters because the woman is freeing herself from the ties of her controlling husband. Her dress is bright blue and we can see her flushed face and red lipstick. There is no music in the scene and is just of the two of them talking quietly. It makes the scene even more intense and brings strength to the characters conversation. The costumes go along with the era that this movie is portraying/made in. It definitley of the olden-days, probably around the 50's or so. The woman is wearing her hair perfectly up, with her makeup done and her dress tight and tidy. The genre would probably be a considered a classic or a drama. The body language is also intresting to note because the two characters are never on the same level. If they are both standing up, he sits down, and after she stands up. This is a symbol of how they aren't ever emotionally on the same level and they disagree with certain subjects.

Film Study

Film is an expressive type of literature in a way that we can see it. Film is video and sound, something we can both see and hear. The conventions of film are directing, producing, acting, creating, writing, screenplay, point of view, lighting, pre/post production. The other components are those similar to the conventions of song and music video which are genre, mood, tone, theme, etc. The director and producer are very important aspects of a film because they create everything we see. They chose the angle in which to catch the actor and actresses and they portray them in a way that best suits the need of the film. We read film by first watching it and pulling out the meaning. We look at the film's overall message and theme and then pick out which components (lighting, symbolism, etc) best express the theme of the movie or film. To me, films are very important. There are many older films that have such great messages and really give off true meaning. Today (although there are some) most films and movies are about stupid topics that are just meant to create humor and not to inspire.

Thursday, October 14, 2010

Thesis #2

Christina Aguilera's song Beautiful critques American societies obsession with humanly perfection through the music, lyrics and images portrayed in her music video.

music: tempo, beat, repitition, instruments, melody and strong vocals
-all helps to enchance the meaning of the video, makes the video empowering, like a declaration of what shes trying to say

lyrics: the music is a metaphorical declaration and the lyrics are the physical declaration of what she is saying about everyone being loved no matter what they look like/feel

images: gay couple, anorexic teenager, bullied teens, transexuals
how all these situations comment on how the world is different and were made to see them as bad and those people in those situations are insecure because the media deems them as abnormal, were not meant to accept them

Paper #2 Prewrite

For my second paper I am going to write about Christina Aguilera's video for her song 'Beautiful.' The song is abut how everyone is beautiful in their own way and expresses that its okay to be different. Its a really slow song which helps to enchance the meaning of the words and make it more dramatic. The video shows her singing to a bunch of different kids. Theres a girl who is looking at her body in the mirror who is clearly battling anorexia. Theres also a gay couple that is kissing and then a boy who is being beat up and bullied by other kids. The song is directed towards them because she is referring to issues like body image and things that make kids different and make them not appreciate their own bodies. She is telling them its okay to be different though and not everyone is perfect and beautiful and skinny like the media portrays. I think the bigger message she is sending out is about the media and how they influence children. Shes commenting on how our society has this obsession with being perfect: beautiful, skinny, heterosexual, normal, etc. But in reality (what she portrays in the video) is that everyone is different and should be loved and appreciated all the same no matter how differently they look on the outside. The song is definetly a message to the world that we need to step back and reasses what we put out as entertainment and how that affects kids who are always surrounded by the same images of beauty. Her lyrics are saying "now and then i get insecure" and "i am beautiful no matter what they say." The "they" she is reffering to in this is the media. Because they gossip about her every move and it starts to eat away at you and saying that even when you are beautiful and skinny and famous you can't get away from feeling insecure because they'll still make you feel bad about being different or famous.

Wednesday, October 13, 2010

Beware New York


This article on CNN is titled, “New York gubernatorial candidate apologized for remarks about gays.” The article is about the New York canadate Carl Paladino and how he had to apologize for a comment he made that offended the gay community. He is a republican who said that he didn’t want children “to be brainwashed into thinking that homosexuality is an equally valid or successful option.” His opponent obviously criticized this comment and is what made Paladino apologize for it afterwards. What bothers me is that Paladino is not sorry for saying that. His apology basically means he takes back what he said, but in reality he wouldn’t of said it if he didn’t mean those things. He isn’t an advocate for gay rights and if not, he needs to stand by that no matter what type of criticism he gets for it. The article later says that he said if he was “elected governor he will fight for the rights of all New Yorkers.” He is being hypocritical. If he doesn’t believe in same-sex relationships then he should stand by that decision and not make a fool out of himself. If I were a New Yorker, I definitely wouldn’t elect this guy.

Thursday, October 7, 2010

Replacements Analysis

This song's plot has very minimal things going on. The whole video is just staring at the stereo while the song is being played. There is one character who comes in but we can only see their legs, as the angle is being pointed down towards the stereo system. We see this character sit down and listen to the song on the couch while he puts his feet up. We also see him take a cigarette and smoke it. And then at the end he gets really angry for some reason and removes everything on top of the stereo and the music stops. The song doesn't really have a climax because the peak of the video is the end when he smashes it and the music stops which is the end of the music video. The video as a whole i think is trying to say that the band members or instruments or what they think about the song is irrelevant. All that matters is the music and nothing else. Its about sitting there with a cigarete (a symbol) in your mouth and enjoying the song while relaxing. I think its trying to say that there isn't really a larger picture or bigger meaning to the song but just simple the song is what it is and to enjoy it, not anaylize it-like im doing right now.

Prodigy Analysis

This video is crazy. The plot of the video is about an ambigious person going about their nightly routine of getting up, drinking and going out to a bar. The setting begins with their house and bathroom and goes on to a few different bars and stripper clubs, and ends back at their house in the bedroom. The entire video is in the point of few of this character. We cannot see them but we can only see what they see. We are in their head the entire time. When the character begins to be extremly intoxicated, we as the viewer also feel intoxicated because we cannot see straight. Our view becomes skewed and everything is blurry. The only real character is the one's whos eyes we are looking through. All the other characters are more backround characters, like the men and woman at the bar. The themes in the video are about sex, drugs and alcohol. The entire time we either see the presence of alchol or drugs and if not either of those, we see naked women or 2 people engaging in sexual acts. I think that the video as a whole comments on our stereotypes of these type of people. The entire video we are watching this person get drunk, vomit everyone, become ridiculously intoxicated and have sex with a prositiute. Because of all these actions, the viewer automatically assumes that the character who's eyes we've been livnig through the entire video is presumably a male. But, in the end of the video the directed throws us a curveball and as we see this persons reflection in the mirror, we realize the person who we thought was a man was actually a woman. We automatically related all the types of behaviors that were portrayed with the acts of a guy. The woman who were yelling were screaming "asshole" and we just assumed that the person they were yelling at was a guy. After we figure out it was a girl all along, we have to rethink our assumtions and how we stereotype these behaviors and didn't even think for a moment that the person could be a girl. The song itself would be considered some time of electronic/techno musics. The entire song has barely any lyrics, and the only lyrics it does say are it's title which is "smack my bitch up." Even the title is confusing because it leads us on the track of believing this is a guy who's talking about his girl or about a girl, but we fell into their trap by not considering the gender of the main character at all. The video is very graphic in every way: violence, sex, drugs, alcohol, nudity. It condusive to the message of the song which is commenting on how we put assumptions to everything without thinking twice about it.

Tuesday, October 5, 2010

Angels or Sluts?


This advertisement is for the Victoria’s Secret heavenly perfume. The ad is of a blonde Victoria’s Secret model that is completely naked. She is wearing nothing but a white angels wing. The woman is holding her hands over her breasts and kneeling down so that her vagina isn’t being shown. She is in a very sexual pose and her facial expressions are very seductive and sexual. The advertisement is aimed towards woman because it is a woman’s scent but the ad seems to be getting the male’s attention. This ad was also found in a gossip magazine, which isn’t usually going to be read by men. The ad is contradicting in this way because what it’s selling physically is for females, but what its selling in the sexual way is for men. The ad is telling women that if you wear this perfume then you will look as beautiful as the model in the photograph. It is misleading because obviously wearing a certain scent cannot change your outer appearance. The ad is also telling woman that you can be sexual but still be considered an angel. The angel wings she is wearing add a certain sense of innocence to her image, even though she is in such a seductive pose. 

In class outline

Outline
Title: Elite Colleges, or Colleges for the Elite?
I.                    Introduction
a.       Hook:  Today’s populist moment allows for an opportune time to examine high education’s biggest affirmative action program, for the children of alumni.
b.      Backround Infortmation:  Legacys affect larger numbers of students than the number of minority students
c.       Thesis: Alumni prefrences should be banned
                                                               i.      “Unlike the issue of racial prefrences, advantages for alumni children- who are overwhelmingly white and weathly-  have been the subject of little scholarship, no state voter initiates and no Supreme Court decisions.”
II.                  Point #1: Unfair advantage: How being an alumni gives you a greater  chance of getting into a college.
a.       Being a child of an alumnus adds the equivalent of 160 SAT points to one’s applicationàincreases chance of admission by 20%
b.      Legacies make up 10-25% of student body
III.                Point #2: Unsupported justification for the program
a.       Accepting more alumni will sustain tradition and increase donations
                                                               i.      7 universites that dropped legacy prefrences, the alumni kept donating
IV.                Point #3: Legal Action
a.       The issue of legacy prefrences haven’t been properly litigated, could be illegal
b.      Violates the equal protection clause of the 14th Amendment
c.       Also may violate the 1866 Civil rights Act
d.      Controversial policies
                                                               i.      Anti-discrimination: can’t classify by ancestry
                                                             ii.      Anti-subordination: must address a brutal history of discrimination
V.                  Conclusion  
a.       Greater Meaning: Confress should outlaw almni prefrences at all universities and colleges receiving federal financing

Music Thesis Statement Revision

Lady Gaga's Bad Romance challenges the stereotypical conventions of a love song to propagate this new ideal of love for a new generation through her reasoning of love within her lyrics, the upbeat and fast tempo of the song, and the happy mood it inspires.
 
 

Music Thesis Statement

Lady Gaga challenges the stereotypical conventions of a love song in Bad Romance through her reasoning of love within her lyrics, the upbeat and fast tempo of the song, and the happy mood it inspires.

Thursday, September 30, 2010

Bad Romance

In the beginning of the song there is a bit of circus music that plays, which comments on the entire song. In the song she is talking about how she wants to be with this guy even though he isn't perfect. She wants everything about him, even the bad. She wants his love, disease, drama, ugly, etc. Unlike a regular love song, (and like the shakespeare sonnet) she isn't talking about the convention reasons that you love somebody. She challenges these conventions by talknig about how she could love every last bit of him. The tempo of the song is very upbeat and happy. There is a dominant base that is reminicant of continuous punching or banging. The tone and mood that it gives off is very happy. When most people listen to this song they can find themselves dancing, jumping up and down and singing along. Whats funny is that the lyrics aren't talking about very happy things but the music gives off the happy upbeat tone so it creates that mood for the entire song. The lyrics are interesting because a lot of her lyrics are made-up words and sounds. "Ra Ra Ah Ah Ah" and "Roma" aren't actual words but she incorperates them into her songs and makes them seem like actual words. The music is kind of techno even though the song's genre would be considered Pop. It definetly has an electronic/techno feel to it because of the upbeat melody. Unlike a lot of pop songs though her voice and vocals are very dominant. You can really hear her voice and the tones that she hits and its not drowned out by a loud backround or base.

Rihanna's Russian Roulette

Rihanna's song Russian Roulette is a somber, slow beat love song. The tempo is very slow and very different from most of her upbeat, happy songs. It has a very persistant beat in the backround that creates this soft, slow melody. The song is very much about her vocals instead of about the music or the beat. Because its slow, her voice is very loud and isn't drowned out by the music. The lyrics go along with the slow tempo with long, dragged out cords which creates a depressing mood. The song is a love song but its more of a sad love song than one that talks about love in a happy light. The lyrics are about the fears of love and talks a lot about death, which most love songs don't touch upon. If i had to put a color to the song it would be navy blue, red and black. The navy blue would be for her vocals because they are dragged out and feel almost long and painful. And the actual lyrics would be red and black because they are dark and depressing and talk about death which reminds me of bood. The genre of the song i think would still be considered pop but more of a jazz/blue base. It has a sort of rythm and blues feel to it but you can still see how it is pop because thats what Rihanna mostly sings. The song gives off a sad mood while at the same time its almost inspiriring and thought-provoking. It makes you think about death and being in a life-or-death situation and how that would make you feel. The lyrics create really strong images such as "you can see my heart through my chest." The imagery is so vivid that we can picture her heart pulsating through her chest because of how frightened she is.

Wednesday, September 29, 2010

Coors Light

This Coors Light ad is showing a can of coors light that has been cut in half. The can reads, "Colder than Kim when you called her Katie." This ad is obviously targeting men and trying to get men to buy the beer. They are enticing them by giving them an analogy of how cold the beer is and relating it to a situation that most men have found themselves in. The saying is demeaning towards women because it is about a woman sleeping with a man and the guy not even having the decency to remember her name. The ad is supposed to make it relatable to men and also has a humorous element to it. The can is peeling away from the can, which is a testament to how cold the can is. It's so cold that the can is pulling away from itself, making a guy want to drink it even more. I think that the ad achieved its goal in getting men to buy this type of beer. But, as a woman, I don't appreciate the message its giving off. It makes it seem as if all woman are going to have one night stands with guys who don't care and are therefore going to call her by the wrong name.

Tuesday, September 28, 2010

I Got a Woman

Ray Charles's song I Got a Woman is a jazz song with an semi-upbeat rythm and melody. The song itself is talking about how Ray has a woman that is really good to him. Unlike the Kanye song, it is not demoralizing women but instead talking about how good this one woman is. He exlpains how she takes care of him and is only demoralizing once when he says, "she knows her place is in the home." But, back then the womans place was in the home. The tempo is kind of slow because of the jazz element. Its genre also could be categorized as rythm and blues because it gives off that melody a little bit. But the jazz part is more apparent because the lyrics are happy and talking about something good, not depressing. It gives off a happy mood and kind of makes you want to jump around and dance a bit. The instrument used are all of the jazz instruments like saxaphone. There is a sax solo in the middle of the song. Its funny how Ray Charles's song is all about how good woman are and how this one particular woman is so good to him and then Kanye takes it and completly turns it around to say how all woman are gold diggers and to watch out for them. He takes his message and flips it on its side. He takes exact lines of the "I got a Woman" song and will change one word of the song to suit "Gold Digger." Its interesting how by changing one word of a line of the song, it changes what that line means altogether.

Gold Digger

Kanye West's song Gold Digger is a rap/hip-hop song about women who date men and are just in it for the money. The song has a very upbeat tempo and is meant to inspire a good and happy mood. The lyrics talk about what a gold digger looks like and how they act. He talks about signing prenuptual agreements and child support in the lyrics. The lyrics have a set chorus that basically is repeating the line, "now i aint sayin she a gold digger." The chorus has the title of the song in it, so that is how you know it is an important part of the song. Since it is a rap song, there are two elements to it. You have the chorus which is has a melody and is actually sung to the music playing. And then the second element is the rapping. The parts that surround the chorus are Kanye's way to express himself-the rap. The rap is much differnt then the chorus because it is just spoken word that is much faster and upbeat then the rest of the song. It usually rhyms and is described as really fast talking. Also since its a rap song there isn't a band involved. The music was prerecorded and was a track that Kanye recorded over, not a live band thats playing while he is singing.

What is Music?

Music is a lyrical song that is put to a melody. The outcome is song that is played together to create a piece of music. That music is then a "track" and is either a single or part of a CD, which has multiple songs. The parts of music are lyrics, melody, rhythm, beat, accoustics, and the band-guittar, piano, bass, drums, etc. All of these parts come together to create a song which is considered music. The different genres of music are pop, rock, country, rap, r&b, hip-hop, jazz, folk, metal, childrens, and soundtracks. A lot of the time, music can fall under multiple catagories and does not strictly have to be one genre only. To me music is very important. Its a way that I can express my feelings because when im in a certain mood i like to listen to certain genres. Music is an outlet for me to express how im feeling at that particular moment. Music is a motivator to me, whether it be for excercise or simply for doing homework. The right type of music for the right time is crutial to my life. We read music by analyizing it the same way we do with a poem or a novel. We pick apart its words and try to analyze what those words are trying to say and what those words symbolize. We also can get a better "reading" of the song by simply reading the title. The title can tell us a lot about what the artist was trying to convey. Other ways to read music is to listen to the beat and rhythm to try to further understand what type of message the artist was sending out and what particular mood the song gives off. The different ways that music is expressed are through song, dance, theatrical performances, drama, tv shows, movies, plays, and musical theatre. Music is a very important element in all types of entertainment whether it be TV or movies- without music it would be a very dull and boring world.

Wednesday, September 22, 2010

Have a Man Head over Heels

This advertisement is for an old swimsuit company called Jantzen. The picture is of a sexy woman laying in a seductive pose wearing a one-piece bikini. There is also a man wearing a bright-yellow Speedo while looking at the woman in shock. Not only is he enthralled with the woman but also his dog looks very excited as well. We can tell that this is a dated ad because of the way it looks and the portrayal of both the man and woman. The text reads, “there’s something about a Jantzen.” The advertisement is implying that by wearing a Jantzen bathing suite you will have all the men flocking towards you and staring at you. The woman is just sitting there without regard to the way the man is acting or what is going on around her. The ad makes it seem like the only way a woman can get a man is with her looks and seemingly great bikini body. Personally I don’t like the ads implication because it makes it seem like all a woman is worth is how she looks in a bathing suite.  This ad is directed towards women because its trying to encourage them to buy their bathing suites but I think making them seem more worthy would sell them better.





Thursday, September 16, 2010

Essay Outline

Intro: Introduce the show, introduce the episode
-explain Lorelia’s financial situation
-explain the grandparents financial situation and what role they play in Lorelia’s education
-Friday night dinners
-Lorelai and Rory
Thesis: Gilmore Girls is a critique the unfairness of class systems through the relationship between Loreilai and her parents, the role that money plays in Rori’s education, and the strong relationship between Loreli and Rory despite the absence of wealth in their family.

Paragraph #1: Through the apparent financial divide between Lorelai and her parents, Gilmore Girls conveys the stereotypes portrayed of the lower and upper classes.
                Evidence1-judge her for becoming pregnant at 16, not the life they wanted for her
Analysis1-depiction of an upper vs. lower class stereotype: rich people don’t get pregnant at a young age
                Evidence2-didn’t finish college, how they don’t appreicate her going back to school       
Analysis2-people with money go to college and graduate right after high school, she did something different and they couldn’t accept it, even when she tried to fix it it wasn’t enough to win back their respect, idea that going to college grants you “respect” and “honor” in your family
Paragraph #2: As Lorelai runs out of funds for Rory’s education, she becomes financially dependent and indebted to her parents reflecting how our credit system is unfair and propagates the class system.
                Evidence1-Lorelia has to borrow money from her parents
Analysis1-Lorelai already doesn’t have enough money, borrowing money from her parents makes her have even less money, in debt. People who have money can go to college, people who don’t have to borrow money and thus have even less money then they started. Poor students poorer
Evidence2-Friday night dinners are an obligation
Analysis2-mirrors being indepted to a bank, they are obligated to go to dinner at their house every Friday night. Unfair- theres always strings attached
Paragraph #3: Rory and Lorelais reltionship is a depiction of the strong divide between classes as well as the relationship it engenders within classes.

Evidence1-rory wants to make her mothers life better-à asks emily herself for money so shes indebted and not her mother
Analysis1-unlike her grandparents she supports her mother, they are in the same class system so she understands, she can relate
Evidence2-supported her going back to school and her dream in opening the dragonfly inn
Analysis2-

Tuesday, September 14, 2010

Live above or get sucked under


This advertisement is one by “Above the Influence,” which is a company that strives to encourage teenagers to stay away from drugs and alcohol. In all of their ads and commercials, they show real situations that kids get put in and how you can avoid those very situations. In this commercial, there is a teenage girl who has passed out, either from too much alcohol or an overdose. She is lying on a cough while other teenagers write on her face and play with her like she is a puppet. They are making fun of her and making her look like a fool. They make remarks like “she is so gone right now” and “she is trashed…she’s going to have a headache in the morning.” What is especially disturbing about this video is that nobody is there to watch over her. Normally in a situation like this, your best friend or someone you trust would be there to look after you and make sure you are okay. But instead she is all alone and being taunted by other kids. The commercial is a very powerful one because most kids who party can relate to this very easily. In the end the words, “If you’re not in control, who is?” appears on the screen, which is a very powerful statement. It makes you want to never be in this situation and live about the influence. 


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-l5JHDupR24

Seinfeld Discussion

Genre: The genre of the show is a sitcom. We know that its a sitcom because of the upbeat music and the audience's laughter in the backround: laughtrack . It is full of jokes and laughter and meant to entertain.
The characters in the scene are Jerry Seinfeld, Elain, and George. They are eating in an italian place and talking about how the whole world has become obsessed with Pesto Sauce. I think that the scene is very true to reality and what goes on in everyday life. People go to dinner all the time and critique their food and people watch and judge other people. The situation with the waiter is also very common. They are all middle-aged, middle-class white people. Something that is missing or absent from the scene is presence of something different. There is nobody who is poor or of a differnt race or african american. Everything is the same and familiar to the average, white American. When Elain is talking about how she is having a "male visitor," this was very common as it's about a male/female relationship. These types of sitcoms are always about relationships and sex and it was not surprising that they brought up her possible new love interest. As we were watching we got to see first hand how shows, even when they aren't being watched on the tv, can be controlling. Since the internet connection was slow, we had to wait patiently for the video to load. Every few minutes it would pause and we would have to sit there and wait for the video to be ready so that we could enjoy it.

They Say I Say Excersice

A) A recent article suggusted that there may be something wrong with the Ohio groundwater and that all residents should take caution when drinking public water.
B) The New York Times has named My Sisters Keeper as “flawless” and deemed it one of the best American novels ever written.
C) The only people who tend to watch football are men because women find that the sport violent.
D) A recent study showed that when in a big, public space of people, women tend to become shy and self-conscious of what they want to say and tend to speak less.
E) The film 500 Days of Summer, the main problem was with the main characters communication and commitment problems.
F) There are many templates in They Say I Say that help students write clear and concise papers.

Paper 1 Freewrite

I am thinking that I will write about and episode of Nip/Tuck. Nip Tuck is a series about 2 best friends who are partners in a plastic surgery buisness. It takes place in miami and is about sex, cheating, lies, scandal, beauty, love and controvery. There is one episode where Seanwho is one of the partners falls in love with one of his patients. He discovers that his patient has cancer and had her breasts removed and she is coming in to get breasts reconstructed. She chickens out and ends up not doing it and they notice that they have a connection for eachother. After some time she comes back after deciding she really does want to have her breasts done and her and Sean get together. They start to have an affair. Sean has a wife and kids and a family but he is going through a rough patch because him and his wife had lost a child. Seans mistress's cancer gets so bad and comes back that she decides to end her own life by overdosing on pills while sean holds her hand. I would like to explore some different themes of love. Like how Sean could be madly in love with both his wife and his mistress, does the heart have the ability to love so many people at once? And also about her suicide. Was it wrong for Sean to let her do it? Was he therefore commiting murder by watching and letting her kill herself? And then the notion of actually killing herself bc the cancer got worse, should she of gotten 2nd opinions, what if there is a cure? In the end Sean and his wife went to her funeral and his wife was suspicious about how utterly depressed he was and figured out that he was having an affair. She cant forgive him, Do marriages ever get over bumps in the road like these? Does betryal make our heart stop loving someone? These are very broad topics about life and death but I could narrow it down to the value of life and the dynamics of a marriage and love and how dishonesty and cheating play a role in almost all marraiges

Thursday, September 9, 2010

Pro-choice

I disagree with the belief that women should not have the choice in whether to keep or abort their pregnancy. There are some situations where women need to be able to decide for themselves if a pregnancy is right for their current predicament. For example, if a woman is raped and therefore becomes pregnant, she should have the right to abort the child, as the pregnancy would create excess trauma in her life. There are many instances where the choice to have a baby should lie solely in the hands of the mother.

Pro-life


Personally, I believe in pro-life. No matter what the situation at hand, a child should never be aborted. A human fetus, even in its first trimester, is a person and thus has a right to life. Life should be valued from the moment the egg is fertilized. If you kill this embryo or fetus, you are killing a person. If murdering a human being is ethically wrong, then so is killing an innocent fetus.

Wednesday, September 8, 2010

Miley Cyrus Unleashed


Miley Cyrus is growing up. The 17 year-old pop star recently released her video for her new single “Can’t Be Tamed.” This video acted as a way that she could “come out” and breakaway from her squeaky clean Disney tween image. Miley is portrayed as a sex symbol and a bird-like creature that people have traveled to look at. She is in a cage and breaks away from the cage as to metaphorically show her coming into her own and leaving Disney behind. The entire video she is wearing nothing but what seems to be lingerie and hooker boots. Her dance moves are sexual and sensual, as to symbolize her transition into becoming a woman. She is surrounded by dancers the entire video, while they simulate same-sex kissing and provocative dancing. It is fine that Miley wants to grow up, but the problem lies that some of her fans have not. Most Miley Cyrus fans are around the ages of 5-12. These girls are certainly not grown up and may not be mature enough to see a video that is so raunchy and sexual. Personally, I think that she could have weened her way into this “new and improved” Miley instead of just shocking all her fans and parents with her overt sexual behavior. But, she certainly accomplished what she hoped for: Miley version 2.0

Tuesday, September 7, 2010

Don't Tread on Me

This news article is about a man, Andy McDonel, who put up a flag in front of his house in Arizona. It is a 3x5 yellow flag that reads “Don’t Tread on Me,” with a serpent coiling above it. The neighbors who saw this flag were obvously offended and called the Home Owner’s Association to take care of the issue. McDonel put up this flag as a representation of all our founding fathers have done for our country. The Home Owners Association on the other hand, does not believe that the flag stands for anything significant. They are claiming that the flag, “doesn’t fit [their] rules” (Webb). McDonel has no intention of taking the flag down because he thinks it is a symbol of patriarchy. He plans to leave the flag up and do whatever it takes to show he is not in the wrong.

Wednesday, September 1, 2010

Women Empowered by Dove

Dove has always been a company that is known for using real women to sell their products. This advertisement is for a dove self-tanning body lotion. There are 4 women in this advertisement. They are all in their bra and underwear and are proudly showing off their bodies next to each other, embracing their differences. Unlike most ads where women are half naked, these 4 women are "real," everyday women. They are not size 0 models but women of all different size, shape and color. Some of the women are thin and some of them are not. Unlike other ads that are misleading and try to make you buy these products simply to look like the skinny women in the photos, this ad appeals to the universal women and is true to what real women look like. Some of these women are tall, some are short, some are big breasted, and some are not. This is the reality of our world, which makes this ad appealing to not only model-sized women but to all women. The ad’s text says, “good for your skin great for your look.” This text is a feel-good line that appeals to everyone. As an individual, each woman can use this lotion as a way to make her personal look great. I personally like this advertisement and think Dove’s marketing approach is empowering and I hope that many other products will follow in their footsteps. Dove Ad

Tuesday, August 31, 2010

Milk Advertising

All grown up? I’m pretty sure that when this add came out they were barely even 18 years old. They aren’t even grown up now. They are like 23 or 25 or something. They definetly aren’t “all grown up” in this advertisment. They are trying to make it seem like if you drink milk your gonna grow up faster but it is misleading. Maybe your bones may grow faster and stronger but it doesn’t mean that your body or brain as a whole is going to grow faster. They are also using an element of sexuality her e that bothers me. Most of these milk adds are for children because most kids don’t like drinking milk and these adds are suppose to encourage them to do so. The banana on her shirt automatically brings my mind to a falic refrence which isn’t appropriate for children to be thinking about. But then again if a child is looking at this ad maybe that wouldn’t be the first thing that comes to their mind. But, on the same banana shirt we can see her stomache. And whats annoying is that you can tell that the shirt has been rolled up. It wasn’t accidentily too small or a “crop top” that intentionally shows her stomache. You can tell that the shirt was scrunched up so that we can see a little bit of her stomache. And like I said that isn’t exactly appropaite for children to be looking at. If I were a mother and I knew my girls were obsesesd with Mary Kate and Ashley (as I was as a kid..still sorta am) I wouldn’t want my girls to be mimicing this behavior and pulling up shirt up just because they thought it would make them grow up faster and make them beautiful like the twins. Also going back to the banana, it kind of feels like they are advertising for two different items. Are you telling me that drinking milk will give me strong bones and make me grow up faster? Or is it the potassium in bananas that’s going to make me grow up faster? I’m confused. And whoever in this class said that that wasn’t real milk just kind of grossed me out. And with the idea of the fallic banana on her shirt and the white “milk” on the top of her mouth just makes this ad even more sexual then I originally thought. Sorry if that’s innaporpaite but that’s what my mind went too. Which means that was probably what the advertisers were trying to get the readers to think about. And maybe it does its job in making kids think that drinking milk will make them grown up and be beautiful and sexual like these girls but its giving off the wrong idea and there could be (in my opinion) better ways to encourage children to drink milk.